7th Meeting (Descriptive Text) A Woman from Heaven

7th Meeting

Theme ; A Person I admire

Okta Mahendra (12340005)

A Woman from Heaven

Do you admire someone? How big your love to someone you admire? Yes, actually, every single person feels it. They admire the other people in their life. Between one and another person has different person admired, and absolutely different love given to the admired person. It is not something lying. It is totally truth. Many people will feel admiring the other person such as actor, actress, singer, athlete, boyfriend or girlfriend or even their selves. Meanwhile, many people in this world love their admired person; they will not be greedy people who will give all of their loves to their admired person. Usually they will give perfect and bigger love to someone who extremely important and mercy in their life. They will do everything for their admired people without thinking that it will be useless or even it will spend much time, money or power. Those all for seeing the happiness on their admired person’s eyes. So, who is the admired person that always gets perfect and bigger love from us? Yes, the answer is our parents, especially our beloved mother. You must agree with my statement.

Talking about mother as person who I admire, first it will be all about her biography. My wonder mother name is Jumirah. It is her totally Javanese name which sounds like title of Kangen Band song, Juminten. So, that name is very easy to memorize by many people. She got that pretty name from her parent which has meaning; Jum is mirrored at the day she born, Friday or in Javanese language is Jumuah; and Irah is a girl who will use all of his senses for doing all kindness, making  useful things, creating luxurious way and helping each other’s . Beneath many people call her Bude Jum, Mbok Ndut, or the brave woman. I preciously like about all of names on her. Next, talking about birth track, she was born in Central Java, on November, 9^th 1974, so if it is counted, now she is 40 years old.

Second, talking about her homestay, she lives in Toto Projo, Way Bungur District of East Lampung regency, especially on Way Bungur Street.  Before immigrating, she lived in Nambah Dadi, Central of Lampung. She lives with my father, my beautiful young sister and me.

Third, her drawing on her, On her head are straight black short hair and small ears so it seems a hair shampoo model. On her face are almond shaped eyes with black cornea, big nose, and thick eyebrow. On the lower part of her face are two medium lips and a half-egg chin surrounded with oval face.  Her height is 153 cm, she is not too tall. In addition, her weight is 75 kilograms with A blood type. All of on her make her looks so beautiful. So many people think that she is beautiful hajj, and I really cannot forget her face as women I admire.

Next, my mother job is seller of traditional foods. She can make many kinds of food, snack or cake. She always makes food for selling or for ordering. Many consumers feel satisfied of my mother’s food taste and the varieties. So, many consumers those always buy or order foods to my mother for their event such as Yasinan (Islamic agenda), wedding party, and many events or even for consuming. For that work, my mother can save money for my young sister and me for payment of educational system and also it can be used for fulfill our necessities every day.

Last, my mother as a woman from heaven is hard loyal and care mother to her children and her husband. She will do everything for her family without feeling tired or hopeless. She works hard for earning money every day. Those she does because she very loves her family so much. She does not want to see her family hungry or sad. She just wants her family happy in every time passed. She will be sad if she sees there is painful problem on their family’s eyes. She is pride woman in this world for my family.

All of those about my shiny women from heaven in my life. Meanwhile she is not perfectionist women, but I am proud of her. Everything on her is everything on me. I cannot forget about her all of long my days. I totally grateful to my Almighty God Allah SWT for having her as my admired mother.

ANALYZING OF THE TEXT
Title	A Woman from Heaven
Topic Sentences	1.     Do you admire someone? (Paragraph 1) 2.     Talking about mother as person who I admire, first it will be all about her biography. (Paragraph 2) 3.     Second, talking about her homestay, she lives in Toto Projo, Way Bungur District of East Lampung regency, especially on Way Bungur Street (Paragraph 3) 4.     Third, her drawing on her, on her head is straight black short hair and small ears so it seems a hair shampoo model. (Paragraph 4) 5.     Next, my mother job is seller of traditional foods. (Paragraph 5) 6.     Last, my mother as a woman from heaven is hard loyal and care mother to her children and her husband. (paragraph 6) 7.     All of those about my shiny women from heaven in my life. (paragraph 7)
Supporting Sentences	1.     How big your love to someone you admire? Yes, actually, every single person feels it.…. (paragraph 1) 2.     My wonder mother name is Jumirah. It is her totally Javanese name which sounds like title of Kangen Band song, Juminten. So, that name is very easy to memorize by many people. …. (paragraph 2) 3.     Before immigrating, she lived in Nambah Dadi, Central of Lampung. She lives with my father, my beautiful young sister and me. (Paragraph 3) 4.     On her face are almond shaped eyes with black cornea, big nose, and thick eyebrow. On the lower part of her face are two medium lips and a half-egg chin surrounded with oval face.  … (Paragraph 4) 5.     She can make many kinds of food, snack or cake. She always makes food for selling or for ordering. Many consumers feel satisfied of my mother’s food taste and the varieties. (Paragraph 5) 6.     She will do everything for her family without feeling tired or hopeless. She works hard for earning money every day. (Paragraph 6) 7.     Meanwhile she is not perfectionist women, but I am proud of her. Everything on her is everything on me. I cannot forget about her all of long my days. (Paragraph 7)
Identification (Opening Paragraph)	Do you admire someone? How big your love to someone you admire? Yes, actually, every single person feels it. They admire the other people in their life. Between one and another person has different person admired, and absolutely different love given to the admired person. It is not something lying. It is totally truth. Many people will feel admiring the other person such as actor, actress, singer, athlete, boyfriend or girlfriend or even their selves. Meanwhile, many people in this world love their admired person; they will not be greedy people who will give all of their loves to their admired person. Usually they will give perfect and bigger love to someone who extremely important and mercy in their life. They will do everything for their admired people without thinking that it will be useless or even it will spend much time, money or power. Those all for seeing the happiness on their admired person’s eyes. So, who is the admired person that always gets perfect and bigger love from us? Yes, the answer is our parents, especially our beloved mother. You must agree with my statement.
Description (Body Paragraph)	Talking about mother as person who I admire, first it will be all about her biography. My wonder mother name is Jumirah. It is her totally Javanese name which sounds like title of Kangen Band song, Juminten. So, that name is very easy to memorize by many people. She got that pretty name from her parent which has meaning; Jum is mirrored at the day she born, Friday or in Javanese language is Jumuah; and Irah is a girl who will use all of his senses for doing all kindness, making  useful things, creating luxurious way and helping each other’s. Beneath many people call her Bude Jum, Mbok Ndut, or the brave woman. I preciously like about all of names on her. Next, talking about birth track, she was born in Central Java, on November, 9th 1974, so if it is counted; now she is 40 years old. Second, talking about her homestay, she lives in Toto Projo, Way Bungur District of East Lampung regency, especially on Way Bungur Street.  Before immigrating, she lived in Nambah Dadi, Central of Lampung. She lives with my father, my beautiful young sister and me. Third, her drawing on her, On her head is straight black short hair and small ears so it seems a hair shampoo model. On her face are almond shaped eyes with black cornea, big nose, and thick eyebrow. On the lower part of her face are two medium lips and a half-egg chin surrounded with oval face.  Her height is 153 cm, She is not too tall. In addition, her weight is 75 kilograms with A blood type. All of on her make her looks so beautiful. So many people think that she is beautiful hajj, and I really cannot forget her face as a woman I admire. Next, my mother job is seller of traditional foods. She can make many kinds of food, snack or cake. She always makes food for selling or for ordering. Many consumers feel satisfied of my mother’s food taste and the varieties. So, many consumers those always buy or order foods to my mother for their event such as Yasinan (Islamic agenda), wedding party, and many events or even for consuming. For that work, my mother can save money for my young sister and me for payment of educational system and also it can be used for fulfill our necessities every day. Last, my mother as a woman from heaven is hard loyal and care mother to her children and her husband. She will do everything for her family without feeling tired or hopeless. She works hard for earning money every day. Those she does because she very loves her family so much. She does not want to see her family hungry or sad. She just wants her family happy in every time passed. She will be sad if she sees there is painful problem on their family’s eyes. She is pride woman in this world for my family.
Conclusion	All of those about my shiny women from heaven in my life. Meanwhile she is not perfectionist women, but I am proud of her. Everything on her is everything on me. I cannot forget about her all of long my days. I totally grateful to my Almighty God Allah SWT for having her as my admired mother.