Second task 2

                                                           

Goood Morning  sweet writters? 

Are you going to make descriptive text?

Dizzy about it? Lazy? Yeah I have reference for you, read them below.

WRITING 3 ASSIGNMENT

NAME                : Okta Mahendra

SRN                     :12340005

4^th SEMESTER

First you may know what coherence and unity are before making them.

A.   The way to write paragraph with adequate and inadequate unity

Some of students always dizzy to make paragraph or eventhough a text beacause of the written itself. They think the text or the paragraph always make round and it is not coherence among the sentences or the paragraphs.

So , for finishing that problem, we have to know about adequate and inadequate unity , so it will be in right written position. Yeah,  when we are writting a paragraph, we should put into three of components of paragrpahs ; those arenamely : Topic Sentence, supporting sentences, and concluding sentences. They three will be requirements to make written easily, coherencily, and meaningfull.

What about unity itself? Yeah, from the word we will catch that unity is grouping and  mixing. So, unity is if we are going to make written, we have to give main idea, main sentence in each paragraph as the foundation to buid your eritten up. For instance, if we are going to go to Cendrawasih Market, we have to know the way , the goal or the aim of going there, so it will be there correctly.

B.   Coherence and unity?

Coherence and unity in this concept is solid. In latin word it is cohere  means”hold together”( Oshima and Hogue, 2006 at Dedi Turmudi, 2013). All of the sentences in one paragraph have to be hold together with appropriate transitions. It is one of two criterias in making good paragraph.  Another good criteria of pargraph is unity. Unity means that a paragraph discusses one and only one main idea from the beginning to end. One main idea can be develop into specific topic what is called topic sentence. In the topic sentence there ere two parts; a topic and a controlling idea. Supposed you have a main idea that is education, you can make it into good education than make “Good Education”into topic sentence: good education has three characteristics. A good education is a topic and three characters in controlling idea. All in all, coherence and unity mean that a paragrph has one main idea and all the supposting sentences and detail are hold togethr with appropriate transitions. (Dedi Turmudi, Smart and Skillfull Writter, 2013: 2)

C.     Great Example of Descriptive with Understanding Coherence and Unity

 

My Specialities

Okta Mahendra is my cute sweet full name which is look like an entertainer name. I got that pretty name from my parent which has meaning; Okta is mirrored at the month I born, October; and Mahendra is a man who will use all of his senses for doing all kindness, making  useful things, creating luxurious way and helping each others . Beneath many people call me Andrew, Oppa , or Okta. I preciously like about all of names on me. I was born in Nambah Dadi, Central of Lampung on October, 9^th 1994 , so if it is counted, now I am 19 years old .

I live in Toto Projo, Way Bungur Districk of East Lampung regency, especially on Way Bungur Street.  Before immigrating, I lived in Nambah Dadi, Central of Lampung. I live with my parent and a beautiful young sister.

My drawing on me, On my head are straight black short hair and small ears so it seems a hair shampoo model. On my face are almond shaped eyes with black cornea, big nose, thick eyebrow, acnes spot on it, and I have been wearing minus glasses for two years. On the lower part of my face are two medium lips and a half-egg chin surrounded with oval face.  My height is 170 cm, I do not look so tall nor does too short. In addition, my wight is 60 kilograms with A blood type.

My hobbies that always do in free time are singing and listening songs. I am totally like music and song, so it can not be kicked from my daily activities. I often sing Afgan, JKT48, Japanese songs, and some nice West songs from Owl City.  Because of it, now I am a member of famous vocal group named PSM Mentari in Muhammadiyah University of Metro and it is look like a professional singer when I am singing a song at graduation ceremony.

All of those about me, meanwhile I am not too handsome, but I have pride that it must be thankful to my Almighty God. I believe I have different specialities which other people do not have them.

D.   Identication of the text

My Specialities

Okta Mahendra is my cute sweet full name which is look like an entertainer name. I got that pretty name from my parent which has meaning; Okta is mirrored at the month I born, October; and Mahendra is a man who will use all of his senses for doing all kindness, making  useful things, creating luxurious way and helping each others . Beneath many people call me Andrew, Oppa , or Okta. I preciously like about all of names on me. I was born in Nambah Dadi, Central of Lampung on October, 9^th 1994 , so if it is counted, now I am 19^th years old .

I live in Toto Projo, Way Bungur Districk of East Lampung regency, especially on Way Bungur Street.  Before immigrating, I lived in Nambah Dadi, Central of Lampung. I live with my parent and a beautiful young sister.

My drawing on me, On my head are straight black short hair and small ears so it seems a hair shampoo model. On my face are almond shaped eyes with black cornea, big nose, thick eyebrow, acnes spot on it, and I have been wearing minus glasses for two years. On the lower part of my face are two medium lips and a half-egg chin surrounded with oval face.  My height is 170 cm, I do not look so tall nor does too short. In addition, my wight is 60 kilograms with A blood type.

My hobbies that always do in free time are singing and listening songs. I am totally like music and song, so it can not be kicked from my daily activities. I often sing Afgan, JKT48, Japanese songs, and some nice West songs from Owl City.  Because of it, now I am a member of famous vocal group named PSM Mentari in Muhammadiyah University of Metro and it is look like a professional singer when I am singing a song at graduation ceremony.

All of those about me, meanwhile I am not too handsome, but I have pride that it must be thankful to my Almighty God. I believe I have different specialities which other people do not have them.

Note of the generic structures

·         Green word phrase is title

·         Red sentences ( first paragraph) are Identification

·         Purple sentences ( second to fourth paragraphs) are description