6thAssignment of Writing 3
Name : Okta Mahendra
SRN : 12340005
Lecturer : Mr. Dedy
Subandowo
A. Title
: Regretfully On Me
B.
Topic : If I could go back to my last
time
C. Identifying
of text
Composition
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Paragraphs
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Introductory
Paragraph
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If
I had been back in my nicely last time, I would have been preciously totally
glad and would have felt the different situation in my life ever. It is a
same as a wish that many people in this world would not have faced it in
twice. Many people think how to go back in their past time whether in
happiness side or even in sadness situation for evaluation or repairing
something that it was extremely valuable for them. As my brain think around
in my naked brain, sometimes I think I have to get Doraemon cat. Why? Yeah,
As many people know, Doraemon has super magic power pocket on his body that
has many tools, toys or time machine for giving people hopes like make the
people wants come true by using time return machine from his white pocket,
and it will send the person or people to some situation that they want. For
instance, Returning back people to olden times for doing research or just
watch dinosaur life, giving back to
the people to ancient time for knowing previous old people at that time or
even making people time be back at the time that really want to be changed or
repair. Yeah, as my feeling I expect I would have been back in my children
hood, when I was naughty and rebel child to my parent and my lovely family.
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Orientation
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When I was 6 years old, I was absolutely naughty
. My attitude was bad. My parent and my family could not control me in a calm
side of mine. I was always refuting my parent advice to better child and obey
child who always study in every free time I got.
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Complication
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One
day, in a summer holiday when I wanted
to go to my friend’s home at 10 o’clock to get nice summer hang out, my
father was angry to me because I did not do my routine, that was studying
before playing. He shouted me loudly, “Andrew! Come here, let you go back
home or I will catch you! You have not done your studying.” I did not care
about my father’s command, and I decided
to run faster than ever while screaming, “No, I do not want . I will play
with my friends there, Dad!” I continued to run faster than before for a
moment. Unfortunately, I felt tired
and I discontinued in running. I guessed my father stopped to catch me , so I walked slowly,
but how shocked of me, suddenly my father hold me from behind. He hug me
strongly till I could not waive his hold. I tried to escape from his hug, but
one more it was so hard. Finally, he brought me to home.
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Resolution
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After
coming home, he was totally angry. His face was red like red chili. He scolded
at me loudly. He felt that his advice was not considered by me. “I have said
to you, do not go anywhere if you have not studied about your material in
school. Why you are so annoyed? Do you want to be unsuccessful man in the
future?” He took me to warehouse and
leaft me there by locking the door. I cried loudly while saying I would not
do it anymore. I was preciously regretful about all of my bad attitude. “Forgive
me Dad; I will be obey child now.”
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Coda
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After
getting that moment, I wish I will not do it again and tried to be calm cool
man. If I had been back in my that last time, I would have been preciously totally
glad and would have changed my bad attitude into good attitude.
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D. The
Text
Regretfully On Me
If
I had been back in my nicely last time, I would have been preciously tottaly
glad and would have felt the different situation in my life ever. It is a same as
a wish that many people in this world would not have faced it in twice. Many
people think how to go bact in their past time whether in happiness side or
even in sadness situation for evaluation or repairing something that it was
extremely valuable for them. As my brain think around in my naked brain,
sometimes I think I have to get Doraemon cat. Why? Yeah, As many people know,
Doraemon has super magic power pocket on his body that has many tools, toys or time
machine for giving people hopes like make the people wants come true by using
time return machine from his white pocket, and it will send the person or
people to some situation that they want. For instance, Returning back people to
olden times for doing research or just watch dinosaur life, giving back to the people to ancient time for
knowing previous old people at that time or even making people time be back at
the time that really want to be changed or repair. Yeah, as my feeling I expect
I would have been back in my children hood, when I was naughty and rebel child
to my parent and my lovely family.
When
I was 6 years old, I was absolutely naughty . My attitude was bad. My parent
and my family could not control me in a calm side of mine. I was always refuting
my parent advice to better child and obey child who always study in every free
time I got.
One
day, in a summer holiday when I wanted to go to my friend’s home at 10 o’clock to
get nice summer hang out, my father was angry to me because I did not do my routine,
that was studying before playing. He shouted me loudly, “Andrew! Come here, let
you go back home or I will catch you! You have not done your studying.” I did
not care about my father’s command, and I
decided to run faster than ever while screaming, “No, I do not want . I will
play with my friends there, Dad!” I continued to run faster than before for a
moment. Unfortunately, I felt tired and
I discontinued in running. I guessed my father
stopped to catch me , so I walked slowly, but how shocked of me,
suddenly my father hold me from behind. He hug me strongly till I could not waive
his hold. I tried to escape from his hug, but one more it was so hard. Finally,
he brought me to home.
After
coming home, he was totally angry. His face was red like red chili. He scolded
at me loudly. He felt that his advice was not considered by me. “I have said to
you, do not go anywhere if you have not studied about your material in school.
Why you are so annoyed? Do you wanna be unsuccessful man in the future?” He took me to warehouse and left me there
by locking the door. I cried loudly while saying I would not do it anymore. I was
preciously regretful about all of my bad attitude. “Forgive me Dad, I will be obey
child now.”
After
getting that moment, I wish I will not do it again and tried to be calm cool
man. If I had been back in my that last time, I would have been preciously totally
glad and would have changed my bad attitude into good attitude.
That is all about me
in narrative text with topic, If I could go back to my last time.
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